21-10-2008, 06:35
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חבר מתאריך: 23.09.03
הודעות: 12,132
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שורה שלישית "you was should have to cope" צריך להיות "you should have coped".
שורה שלישית "he didn’t tell you to where he ran but you decided in the morning to looking for him" צריך להיות "he didn't tell you where he ran to but you decided to look for him in the morning".
שורה רביעית "In the one hand" צריך להיות "On one hand".
שורה רביעית "alone in foreign place" צריך להיות "alone in a foreign place".
שורה רביעית "Christian run away and you went to looking for him" צריך להיות "Christian ran away and you went looking for him".
שורה חמישית " I was going to the manger cap" צריך להיות "I would have gone to the camp manager".
שורה חמישית "more effective and safely that your way to try solving the problem" צריך להיות
"safer and more effective than your way of solving this problem".
שורה שישית "To the end" צריך להיות "To conclude".
שורה שישית "you worried about him, but, if you would think some more, the result should be better." צריך להיות "you were worried about him, but if you would have thought some more, the result would have been better".
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Programming today is a race between software engineers striving to build bigger and better idiot-proof programs, and the Universe trying to produce bigger and better idiots. So far, the Universe is winning. -Rick Cook
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