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My Punishment

my feet are burning
my eyes are scorching
and only timeless misery
awaits for me.


Yes I'm in hell


In the deepest darkest cave
and in the biggest grave
I pay my price for what I've done
and for the man that gone
away
to heaven I might say
Oh how much would I pay
to see the light one day


I didn't want to kill
and that blood to spill
It wasn't for the thrill
And yet I'm now alone
have nothing for my own
sentenced for the misery
for all eternity


I killed the man by gun
I didn't even run
my soul has broke apart
I felt it in my heart
But what should I say?
The man had gone away

And what crime have I made
that I deserved my fate?

I lived in misery
no one took care of me
and what did I see?
only my poverty
my will to live was gone
and I was left with none

so I started to rob
that was my job
I broke at night
to houses with no light
with people I did not fight
I took only what's bright

I sold it to a guy
for any price that he will buy
I even had a gun
a nice and shiny one

but if I knew
what was I going to do
I would just throw the gun
I would not kill no one


it was another house
I have already started to browse
I searched downstairs
there was nothing but the pretty chairs
so I went upstairs


and there he stood
I didn't think I could
but I took out my gun
and shot him in the arm
and two times in the chest
blood spill on his vest


and I just stood
like a log of wood
his wife called the police
and I fell on my knees
they sentenced me to death
and with my last breath
I cursed them all
for the great toll
they all made me to take
to have a life of fake
to have a hollow
life of sorrow

oh how much would I give to not be punished twice
to live my life with someone, otherwise
to live one happy moment
to laugh because of joy
for that I will give all I have
I will give up my soul

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