זהו שיר שנכתב לפני כמה חודשים והחלטתי לפרסמו היום... מקווה שתאהבו.

I remember.

Written be Dor Eytan.



Do you remember when we first met?

I remember your red head band

I remember how our story began

Yes, I remember also how it end.

Do you remember our first date?

I remember when we sat on the garden's grass

I remember how we felt each other's body

But those sweet days are all in the past.



And when I go out each night, finishing it with different girls

I just want you to know that I still remember

That I am still guarding your rose.



Do you remember when we first went to the beach?

I remember how we made out in those waves

Today I go to that beach alone

Finding you there, that's what I crave.

Do you remember when you hold me tight?

The day I fell and hurt so bad

You told me time heals all

You promised you'll never leave me behind.



And when I go out each night, finishing it with different girls

I just want you to know that I still remember

That I still guarding your rose.



Do you remember when you called me crying?

When you told me I hurt you, that you were afraid

You warned me that it might be over soon

And I never believed our love might be dead.



Do you remember the day you let me go?

I remember your red crying eyes

I remember the pain from the back stabbing knife

I remember the feeling as the darkness rise.

Do you remember what happened later?

I remember how you went on with your life

So many things I regret, I wish I couldn’t remember

Mostly the pain, from that backstabbing knife.

התחלתי לקרוא והפסקתי באמצע.
אני מצטערת אבל אני לא יכולה לקרוא יצירה עם כל כך הרבה טעויות. ועזוב כתיב...זה בקושי יש
אבל אחי גראאמממררר!!
זה ממש צורם בעין
בהצלחה עם זה.

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