טוב קיבלנו עבודה בשיעור אנגלית, והיא לעשות מן סיכום על פרזנטציה שעשינו בשיעורים עברו. המורה נתנה לנו דף עם הערות לכתיבת הסיכום, ואני כתבתי אותו, עכשיו אני חושב שיש לי מספר טעויות דיקדוקיות ועוד סוגים שונים של בעיות כמו הבעה. אז אני ממש מבקש ממכם לקרוא, ואם אתם רוצים אפילו בריפרוף ולשים הערות ולתקן, זה יעזור לי נורא!. תודה מראש לעוזרים ולעוזרות. ובכן הינה הטקסט:

In my opinion a good speaker is someone who everybody is listening to him because, he is interesting or convincing. And whoever achieves his goals in his presentation. Sure I have more considerations but these are the biggest.

In my presentation I presented about smoking and his damage. For the presentation I searched for more information about my topic. And I found a lot of articles about it. From the articles I found, I learned a lot. For preparing I made a summary and prepared from him, a day before the presentation. Now I know that one day before a presentation about topic that I don't know well I need some more days before, or more hours before the presentation.

From my presentation I learned that I'm not a good English speaker, because I didn’t try to speak in English for long time ago. I don’t know in which part I was good in the presentation, but I know I had a problem with my accent. I chose that topic because it very actual right now, and it interesting for me.

I was the first one who did a presentation, so theoretically for me it was the hardest presentation, because I didn't know exactly what to do, and how to do well. I didn’t know I must to bring pictures or videos, and I didn’t know others mistakes.

From my friends' presentations I learned new interesting topics, and friends who presented about movies and series the most impressed me. Because these topics are interesting for me and I listened for them.

צריך להגיש את הסיכום עד יום חמישי(18.1.07), אז אם אתם קוראים את זה אחרי יום חמישי אז לא חשוב כבר, ושוב, תודה על העזרה

במיוחד כאשר השתמשת בhe במקום it, אבל אני שיניתי את הטקסט קצת כדי שישמע יותר טוב בנוסף לתיקון השגיאות:

In my opinion a good speaker is someone whom everybody listens to, because he/she is interesting or convincing, and achieves his/her goals for the presentation. Other considerations exist, but these are the most important ones. In my presentation, I discussed smoking and the damages associated with it. For this presentation, I performed research to gather information about my topic, and found lots of articles about it. Using these articles, I have learned a great deal. A day before the presentation, I wrote a summary and used it as preparation for the presentation. This made me realize that in order to properly present a topic of which my knowledge is limited, more days or hours prior to the presentation are required.

The presentation made me realize that I am not a very good English speaker, partly because I have not spoken English for a long time. I do not know where in the presentation I did well, but I know that I had difficulties with pronunciation. I chose the particular topic because it is very actual now and is interesting to me.

Since I was the first one to present, I believe I had a greater challenge than others, because I did not know exactly what to do in order to succeed. I did not know that I had to bring pictures or videos, and was not aware of the mistakes of others.

I learned about new interesting topics from my friends’ presentations, and was particularly impressed by presentations about movies and series, because these topics are interesting to me and I paid attention.

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