05-05-2009, 21:55
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חבר מתאריך: 03.05.08
הודעות: 22
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Hey Atzlan...
Looks like you arent really an atzlan.
So here is my harsh comment.
Bike looks great!
Beautiful lighting and shading - as far as one can tell with the post treatment
The not so good stuff in my opinion are:
Eran liked the texture on the wall, I dont. Its nice texture work, but I dont see how that kind of texture contributes to the scene. Maybe a brick wall with some pipes coming out or a small dirty old window.
And the ground texture, I dont really like it either. It just feels to me like a bike in a wooden box, you know what I mean?
And the last thing is the dark wall...its just very harsh and hurts the overall composition.
You did a great job on the bike, just put in that extra bit of work and make it an overall strong piece!
~Ilan
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